Learning from learners: A Fantastic Story

Good evening,my dear English learners! How many mistakes can you find in this story (The story is written by my student  V. from Tashkent.) Feel free to comment below!

Once upon a time, there was a woman called Pia. It was the year 2185. The Earth was still the center of all mankind. As predicted in early 2000, the last resources began to end on the Earth. Then, a private company called the “Andromeda” Initiative decided to send group pf specially trained people to another galaxy. It included scientists, military and others. Pia Alevares was the first volunteer for the role of the Pathfinder.

Pathfinder – one of the main position in the project “Andromeda” Initiative. This person is experienced fighter, scientist and commander in one person. The Pathfinder charged with finding a new home among the so-called “golden worlds”, planets selected on Andromeda galaxy, on which life is possible. The Pathfinder with his team will be responsible for assessins the parameters of th planets being considered within the project.

Pia Alevares was born in 2150. She spent her childhood in Rio, where she first showed her hobbies for exploring unexplored regions. Later, she joined special forces and after 3 years of study became the best student. Having received the title of captain for her services, Pia was seriously interested in the potential of Artificial Intellect and its benefits to humanity. However, due to the development of AI, which is demoted and dismissed with disgrace them the military forces. Nevertheless, Pia did not give up and continued her research. Later, Pia did not give up and continued her research. Later, Pia became a member of the “Andromeda” Initiative project and received the title of Pathfinder of “Anctus”, the Ark of the People.

In 2185, the Ark of the People went on a long journey to the Andromeda galaxy. On a supernatural travel, the journey would take more than 600 years; the colonists had to spend a whole trip in cryostasis.